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dbrightwell1270
dbrightwell1270 Posts: 1,732 Member
edited December 2024 in Social Groups
I borrowed the format from LaAmazona. I just made this tonight. Let me know your thoughts.

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=41588096

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  • christine24t
    christine24t Posts: 6,063 Member
    I like it! I think it is a good mix of information. And I completely feel you on the Sudoku thing!!
  • NCTravellingGirl
    NCTravellingGirl Posts: 717 Member
    I like the format, but there are a LOT of words in there! I'm a talker myself, so I wanted to share a lot of detail but think it overwhelmed most men. Having stared at probably 500 profiles/ pics in the last month, I suggest cutting it down and sharing more of it in person. I would probably stop reading half way through, honestly...

    But I think the concept is a good one. Just use Diana's idea with simple sentences, little explanations... gives more to talk about later!! Good Luck!
  • Daisy_Cutter
    Daisy_Cutter Posts: 774
    I agree -- it looks great! Good luck!
  • MissingMinnesota
    MissingMinnesota Posts: 7,486 Member
    being honest I would get rid of #2 and #3 and move the one about being on bike trails up to #2.

    A lot of people will stop after the first couple and if you the first 3 are all about the same thing it comes across boring.


    edit: btw you will probably now see mine in your who viewed me.
  • SouthernSweetie74
    SouthernSweetie74 Posts: 844
    I loved it! :)

    I, personally, thought it was interesting, and it showed bits of your personality and your questionable sense of humor, which I actually found humorous. :)

    I think it's great. :)

    Good luck!
  • AnnaPixie
    AnnaPixie Posts: 7,439 Member
    I agree, you need to make the bullet points..........bullet points! Short and snappy, not sentences. The PHD should go somewhere in the middle. I'm never sure about putting diet stuff in there. It's fine for someone off MFP, but I dont think the rest of the world would relate. Suffice to say you love running and other activities.

    The first pic is really nice. Not sure about the last one (black top) you look kinda stiff!! You dont need 2 in the same kind of pose anyhow. Try a close up face shot? A self portrait on your phone is how I do mine...lol And try pointing the camera down at you!!! That angle is far more flattering :wink:

    Other than that, your humour is great, you sound easy going and fun to be with. Good luck :flowerforyou:
  • kit_katty
    kit_katty Posts: 992 Member
    I liked it. There were a few good suggestions from other people. I think it's great how you're honest and show who you are. I'd give you a shot!
  • La_Amazona
    La_Amazona Posts: 4,855 Member
    I like it. Shows your personality...

    I do agree, some of them are a little long so I would shorten them up but other than that.. great job!
  • shammxo
    shammxo Posts: 1,432 Member
    I really like the part about "no dudes in drag". Funny :)
  • JanieJack
    JanieJack Posts: 3,831 Member
    Having gotten to know you a little through this forum, I respectfully suggest that you take away #1 (or at the very least, don't make the PhD in economics your #1 thing). I don't think it will attract the kind of woman you are looking for (judging from our private discussion on education and how people wrongly assume they know our personality based on our degrees).

    I agree with the others who suggest shortening it (I PM'd you my suggested edits)

    Love the last paragraph (dudes/smoking)
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