Conquistadors of Cranberries

_errata_
Posts: 1,653 Member
So, I just wrote this. I am plastered and listening to rage against the machine, but whatever. Here it goes:
Cranquistador, you are so beautiful.
I wish I could take back what I did wrong.
But fools always create their own demise.
I offended but have nothing but grief.
Yes, I am ****ing drunk but I still rock.
This is in iambic pentameter.
Which means you should unblock and forgive me.
Cranquistador, you are so beautiful.
I wish I could take back what I did wrong.
But fools always create their own demise.
I offended but have nothing but grief.
Yes, I am ****ing drunk but I still rock.
This is in iambic pentameter.
Which means you should unblock and forgive me.
0
Replies
-
Did it work?0
-
*looks into magic 8 ball*
NO
\m/0 -
*looks into magic 8 ball*
NO
\m/
lmao.
NARP. I'd leave me blocked too with that lame drunk iambic pentameter poem. Not helping my case here.0 -
*looks into magic 8 ball*
NO
\m/
lmao.
NARP. I'd leave me blocked too with that lame drunk iambic pentameter poem. Not helping my case here.
Kind of what I suposed would be the case. If you would have said yes, I would have been shocked.
So, what did you do to offend?0 -
*looks into magic 8 ball*
NO
\m/
lmao.
NARP. I'd leave me blocked too with that lame drunk iambic pentameter poem. Not helping my case here.
Kind of what I suposed would be the case. If you would have said yes, I would have been shocked.
So, what did you do to offend?
I came on strong with the creep. A little too strong.0 -
Kind of what I suposed would be the case. If you would have said yes, I would have been shocked.
So, what did you do to offend?
I came on strong with the creep. A little too strong.
And she didn't like that? I'm interested in what you said that would do that to her.0
This discussion has been closed.