Poem written for DS#1 by his LA cousin
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manladdvm
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My cousin is a soldier.
A real soldier.
A man with his feelings
Kept close to the chest
A man who’s seen war
And the worst of our suffering
A man who’s sweat for a country falling apart
And a world
In need of proper men
In all his history
He has never entered battle like this
Saying goodbye to
Our
Matriarch
The hardest job of all
The closure we fight to win
But never really wish to choose
And to me
His wide eyed little cousin That’s the bravest thing
Of all.
And tomorrow
He will come and go.
Kept close to the chest.
Filled with sorrow.
And like a man he will leave
Filled with pain and honor
Because my cousin is a soldier
A real soldier.
A real soldier.
A man with his feelings
Kept close to the chest
A man who’s seen war
And the worst of our suffering
A man who’s sweat for a country falling apart
And a world
In need of proper men
In all his history
He has never entered battle like this
Saying goodbye to
Our
Matriarch
The hardest job of all
The closure we fight to win
But never really wish to choose
And to me
His wide eyed little cousin That’s the bravest thing
Of all.
And tomorrow
He will come and go.
Kept close to the chest.
Filled with sorrow.
And like a man he will leave
Filled with pain and honor
Because my cousin is a soldier
A real soldier.
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She is a very lovely girl that grew up in NYC and LA with divorced parents and too much money. "Real men" have been in short supply in her life.1
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Wow, Doc! HOW poignant; refreshing; and touching!
So glad DS and the Dinwiddie family have such a close bond with this cousin!
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...and a helicopter pilot to boot.0
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Saluting.0
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Touching.... a man son you can for sure be very proud of. Thank him for his service!0
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As DS#'s1 mom's and dad's heart swells; beautiful0
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Touching indeed. You should feel proud.0
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What a tribute!1
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