Blame it on! (Katie asked me to post this)

Aesop101
Aesop101 Posts: 762 Member
edited November 2024 in Social Groups
Blame It On!

Blame it on my own ex-wife
Blame it on the mirror lies
Blame it on the moon and tides

Fail!
Fail!
Fail!

Curse these shrinkin’ jeans
Curse the lack of means
Curse the big boned me

Fail!
Fail!
Fail!

Shame, the wrong cut dress
Blame the work and stress
Blame it on my life’s a mess

Fail!
Fail!
Fail!

Blame it on Mom and apple pie
Blame it on the mirror lies
Blame it on my own two eyes

Fail!
Fail!



Please note there are only 2 fails after the last stanza symbolizing that the last sentence recognizes personal responsibility.

Replies

  • Bekzness
    Bekzness Posts: 122
    I love this... did you write it? :)
  • Aesop101
    Aesop101 Posts: 762 Member
    I love this... did you write it? :)

    Yes I did. Can't believe it either.
  • katiebythebay
    katiebythebay Posts: 611 Member
    He messaged me the link to it and I read it and instantly loved it.

    I'm not a poem person, but this was deeply dark (to me), which that is me.

    Thanks so much for sharing it with the group. :flowerforyou:
  • Kekibird
    Kekibird Posts: 1,122 Member
    Wow....I like that last blame....blaming it on your own eyes. Everything else used to blame was outside your own power, except the power to see yourself properly.

    Excellent!
  • Aesop101
    Aesop101 Posts: 762 Member
    Thanks folks! I was inspired. Started to write it but then thought how dumb. However I couldn't just let it go and I'm glad I didn't. It almost wrote itself to be honest.
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