A Thank You Note to a Fitness Instructor

I wrote a thank you note and I wanted to know if it was too personal or weird. Thoughts?

Ignorant: Lacking knowledge, information, or awareness about something in particular.

Sorry to say it Michelle, but you’re pretty ignorant. You have no idea how much you have helped me this summer. Sure you may think you’re just doing your job right? But, to me, you have done so much more than teach classes. Everyone has a story, so I’ll just give you a little snipet of mine.
I used to be a runner. I was MVP of my cross-country team, and my relay team went to nationals for track my junior year. I was set to run for college at Emory University. My senior year I was diagnosed with chronic exertional compartment syndrome (an exercise-induced muscle and nerve condition that causes pain, swelling and sometimes even disability in affected muscles of your legs [it’s like shin splints. On crack. That never go away. And get increasingly more painful]). Bottom line: I can’t run until I get surgery.
I joined Lifetime because Hannah basically forced me to so we could work out for prom/ senior week. I was on a pretty good health kick eating right and losing some of the weight I had gained from my lack of running. Then my life got complicated. My mom was admitted in the hospital for emergency surgery. A few weeks after she came home my dad left. A few weeks after that my brother fell ill. I was beside myself. Normally I would run off my frustrations, but I couldn’t. I used food as a coping mechanism. From my junior year to this June I shot up 23 lbs. I was upset and disappointed, and I needed help. Then I found my outlet. I started taking Lifetime classes.
Hannah and I used to call you “the hard one” when we first started taking your classes. Looking back retrospectively we should have called you the most effective one. I like a lot of the classes, but when I take yours I feel so accomplished. I never would have seen myself being able to do 200 squat kicks, but now I look forward to the days when I get to really challenge my body. When I fight through the pain from the never ending knee repeaters, 100 burpees, the minute power move, the 3rd round of the chest progression ect. it makes me feel invincible.
I think a good class starts with the intensity and overall knowledge of the instructor. What separates the good class from the great class though, is the instructor’s ability to turn a seemingly daunting feat into a fun, positive and energetic experience. But I would say that your classes go beyond great because you add in personality and amiability, making them phenomenal classes.
With the help of some great classes taught by the other instructors, and the phenomenal classes taught by you, I was able to better channel my negative energy in a positive way. The classes gave me something to look forward to everyday and confidence to face whatever obstacles I had to deal with at home.
I’m going to miss your classes a lot. They didn’t just assist me in achieving physical goals; they helped me navigate through the mental hurdles that seemed so overpowering. People ask me what I’ll miss when I go to college. When I mention the gym some people give me a weird look or tell me I work out too much. They don’t get it though. They’re ignorant.
I hope you have a great year, and even though my membership ends August 31, I’ll try to find someone to take me as a guest during my breaks back home.

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  • ChrisLindsay9
    ChrisLindsay9 Posts: 837 Member
    I think the letter is solid, and I know that you're going for that dramatic twist with the opening sentence, but I think I would change it to something like

    "Sorry to say it Michelle, but you have no idea, no clue, ....

    ... how much you have helped me "

    Then put another space and start with the rest of the letter. It still serves the same emotional punch, but isn't as jarring as "you're pretty ignorant."

    Just my suggestion. I love the story, and it sounds like the instructor is one of the great ones out there. We need more of them. And good luck to you as your continue to find success in your fitness lifestyle.
  • pittbullgirl
    pittbullgirl Posts: 341 Member
    I agree with the above poster.

    Its a bit abrupt and while I feel you want to convey emotion, for me internally the word "ignorant" didn't cause a happy feel good emotion despite the intent with the rest of the letter.
    I think the letter is much more straightforward than I would expect from a thank you letter.
  • micheleb15
    micheleb15 Posts: 1,418 Member
    I fully understand what ignorant means, but it's usually used in a negative context. I honestly had to read that sentence over a few times to see if I was misreading it because I thought this was a thank you note.
  • ohnoetry
    ohnoetry Posts: 129
    That's a really sweet letter. Maybe you guys can exchange emails and keep in touch?
  • lisanhorowitz
    lisanhorowitz Posts: 38 Member
    Thanks for the suggestions I'll change up the first sentence.
  • sarahrbraun
    sarahrbraun Posts: 2,261 Member
    I wrote a thank you note and I wanted to know if it was too personal or weird. Thoughts?

    Ignorant: Lacking knowledge, information, or awareness about something in particular.

    Sorry to say it Michelle, but you’re pretty ignorant. You have no idea how much you have helped me this summer. Sure you may think you’re just doing your job right? But, to me, you have done so much more than teach classes. Everyone has a story, so I’ll just give you a little snipet of mine.
    I used to be a runner. I was MVP of my cross-country team, and my relay team went to nationals for track my junior year. I was set to run for college at Emory University. My senior year I was diagnosed with chronic exertional compartment syndrome (an exercise-induced muscle and nerve condition that causes pain, swelling and sometimes even disability in affected muscles of your legs [it’s like shin splints. On crack. That never go away. And get increasingly more painful]). Bottom line: I can’t run until I get surgery.
    I joined Lifetime because Hannah basically forced me to so we could work out for prom/ senior week. I was on a pretty good health kick eating right and losing some of the weight I had gained from my lack of running. Then my life got complicated. My mom was admitted in the hospital for emergency surgery. A few weeks after she came home my dad left. A few weeks after that my brother fell ill. I was beside myself. Normally I would run off my frustrations, but I couldn’t. I used food as a coping mechanism. From my junior year to this June I shot up 23 lbs. I was upset and disappointed, and I needed help. Then I found my outlet. I started taking Lifetime classes.
    Hannah and I used to call you “the hard one” when we first started taking your classes. Looking back retrospectively we should have called you the most effective one. I like a lot of the classes, but when I take yours I feel so accomplished. I never would have seen myself being able to do 200 squat kicks, but now I look forward to the days when I get to really challenge my body. When I fight through the pain from the never ending knee repeaters, 100 burpees, the minute power move, the 3rd round of the chest progression ect. it makes me feel invincible.
    I think a good class starts with the intensity and overall knowledge of the instructor. What separates the good class from the great class though, is the instructor’s ability to turn a seemingly daunting feat into a fun, positive and energetic experience. But I would say that your classes go beyond great because you add in personality and amiability, making them phenomenal classes.
    With the help of some great classes taught by the other instructors, and the phenomenal classes taught by you, I was able to better channel my negative energy in a positive way. The classes gave me something to look forward to everyday and confidence to face whatever obstacles I had to deal with at home.
    I’m going to miss your classes a lot. They didn’t just assist me in achieving physical goals; they helped me navigate through the mental hurdles that seemed so overpowering. People ask me what I’ll miss when I go to college. When I mention the gym some people give me a weird look or tell me I work out too much. They don’t get it though. They’re ignorant.
    I hope you have a great year, and even though my membership ends August 31, I’ll try to find someone to take me as a guest during my breaks back home.

    Honestly, I would definitely cut out the part where you tell her she is ignorant. I would also shorten the part about how tough your life has been.

    I have written "fan letters" to trainers... I adore my first trainer. We developed a very close friendship that continued even when he moved 2,000 miles away. Just tell her the positive stuff in regards to her job. She'll love it.
  • GetSoda
    GetSoda Posts: 1,267 Member
    Give her an envelope.

    On the outside it says:

    Thanks. -Your name.

    On the inside is money.


    She will love it much more.
  • lisanhorowitz
    lisanhorowitz Posts: 38 Member
    I edited the first 3 paragraphs. Better?
    You have no idea how much you have helped me this summer. Sure you may think you’re just doing your job right? But, to me, you have done so much more than teach classes. Everyone has a story, so I’ll just give you a little snipet of mine.
    I used to be a runner. I was MVP of my cross-country team, and my relay team went to nationals for track my junior year. My senior year I was diagnosed with chronic exertional compartment syndrome (an exercise-induced muscle and nerve condition that causes pain, swelling and sometimes even disability in affected muscles of your legs [It’s like shin splints. On crack. That never go away. And get increasingly more painful]). Bottom line: I can’t run until I get surgery.
    I joined Lifetime because Hannah basically forced me to so we could work out for prom/ senior week. Then my life got complicated. Mom got emergency surgery, dad left, and my brother was checked into rehab. Normally I would run off my frustrations, but I couldn’t. I used food as a coping mechanism and shot up 23 lbs. Then I found my outlet. I started taking Lifetime classes.