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Confusion Im Not

djnelson1024
djnelson1024 Posts: 138
edited September 2024 in Chit-Chat
I lay here in bed my mind is awake,

My body is alone it is fast asleep

I do not see what I have wronged

How do I find things and make them right

I may have moved to fast too soon

I can not slow the feelings, Im alone

I want to cry and close my eyes

But the mention of you makes me happy and true

When I dove into this life we have

I retreated and fell on my face, Im so blue

The confusion of life leaves my mind awake

As my body alone is now far from sleep

What have I done

What didnt I do

Please help me my friends

Ill continue on through

but without your help

the confusion does brew

My mind is tired

my body awake

How will I sleep

What do I forsake

Fill my body with sleep allow me to restart

Ill wake up this morning

Gone away is my heart

Once again a new work by me, Cant seem to sleep too well his eve been thinking too much anyway if anyone is interested in my poetry feel free to add me on FB I have many poems written on there as well Here is the link to my Profile. Thanks to everyone for all there support so far I love this site Enjoy my friends

http://www.facebook.com/?ref=home#!/profile.php?id=1842982249

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  • MysticMaiden22
    MysticMaiden22 Posts: 324 Member
    I'll be sure to add you...I love poetry. I actually write short stories in my spare time...but I'm often too embarrassed to share them, lol.

    Sleepless nights are the best times for amazing work.
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  • Great looking forward to reading some of your writing you should never be embarrased children of today arent exposed as much to this art of writing or creative expression, not until college do they actually get to experience if they want I love to share my work. So thanks for the comment have a great day SMILES
  • Then you got that jist of it Maximus that is why it is confusion
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