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Confusion Im Not

djnelson1024
Posts: 138
I lay here in bed my mind is awake,
My body is alone it is fast asleep
I do not see what I have wronged
How do I find things and make them right
I may have moved to fast too soon
I can not slow the feelings, Im alone
I want to cry and close my eyes
But the mention of you makes me happy and true
When I dove into this life we have
I retreated and fell on my face, Im so blue
The confusion of life leaves my mind awake
As my body alone is now far from sleep
What have I done
What didnt I do
Please help me my friends
Ill continue on through
but without your help
the confusion does brew
My mind is tired
my body awake
How will I sleep
What do I forsake
Fill my body with sleep allow me to restart
Ill wake up this morning
Gone away is my heart
Once again a new work by me, Cant seem to sleep too well his eve been thinking too much anyway if anyone is interested in my poetry feel free to add me on FB I have many poems written on there as well Here is the link to my Profile. Thanks to everyone for all there support so far I love this site Enjoy my friends
http://www.facebook.com/?ref=home#!/profile.php?id=1842982249
My body is alone it is fast asleep
I do not see what I have wronged
How do I find things and make them right
I may have moved to fast too soon
I can not slow the feelings, Im alone
I want to cry and close my eyes
But the mention of you makes me happy and true
When I dove into this life we have
I retreated and fell on my face, Im so blue
The confusion of life leaves my mind awake
As my body alone is now far from sleep
What have I done
What didnt I do
Please help me my friends
Ill continue on through
but without your help
the confusion does brew
My mind is tired
my body awake
How will I sleep
What do I forsake
Fill my body with sleep allow me to restart
Ill wake up this morning
Gone away is my heart
Once again a new work by me, Cant seem to sleep too well his eve been thinking too much anyway if anyone is interested in my poetry feel free to add me on FB I have many poems written on there as well Here is the link to my Profile. Thanks to everyone for all there support so far I love this site Enjoy my friends
http://www.facebook.com/?ref=home#!/profile.php?id=1842982249
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I'll be sure to add you...I love poetry. I actually write short stories in my spare time...but I'm often too embarrassed to share them, lol.
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Great looking forward to reading some of your writing you should never be embarrased children of today arent exposed as much to this art of writing or creative expression, not until college do they actually get to experience if they want I love to share my work. So thanks for the comment have a great day SMILES0
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Then you got that jist of it Maximus that is why it is confusion0
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