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Just some poems I wrote...

sjkcarter
sjkcarter Posts: 417 Member
edited September 2024 in Chit-Chat
This is kind of how I am feeling after this very long weekend.


Alone

I wake and there you are
To see your face is my hearts desire
Arms intertwined while we hold one another
Our hearts beat as one
To spend our lives in this one embrace
Lying here as one is like a dream
And then I truly awaken
ALONE....


Unrequited Love

On my mind day and night
Can't eat, can't sleep
Yearning for your touch
To be with you
Be in your arms
Breathe in your scent
Clouded by the thought of you
Eyes clouded by the tears that come when I realize there is no you
My unrequited LOVE....

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  • _beachgirl_
    _beachgirl_ Posts: 3,865 Member
    Very beautiful and melancholy. Keep writing poems, you're good at it!
  • PoshTaush
    PoshTaush Posts: 1,247
    Great work...so sad! :0( Hope you find your love soon! :0)
  • DarkAngel864
    DarkAngel864 Posts: 229 Member
    Hits close to home for me. Do we know each other? :laugh:
  • sjkcarter
    sjkcarter Posts: 417 Member
    Hits close to home for me. Do we know each other? :laugh:

    I think a lot of people can relate to things I write. I just write from the heart.
  • LoveleeB
    LoveleeB Posts: 560 Member
    Those are beautiful yet dark at the same time. I like it!
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