The Path of Life
shawnscott5
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My son wrote this poem two days before my father lost his battle with cancer. I am really having an "I miss my dad day" and I thought that I would share.
The Path of Life
From the first day we are born
We have a path that is torn
From choices of right or wrong
For our path of life is long
When young we don't know right from wrong
But guidance helps us along
For all we can do is crawl
And if we run too fast, we might fall
When we are in our life of mid
In our life we start to bid
For some choices made bad and good
For some choices in life we wish we could
When in our life of last
We are thankful for our past
Its time to share our great path
Before our life is in the past
By Stephen Wallace 18 years
The Path of Life
From the first day we are born
We have a path that is torn
From choices of right or wrong
For our path of life is long
When young we don't know right from wrong
But guidance helps us along
For all we can do is crawl
And if we run too fast, we might fall
When we are in our life of mid
In our life we start to bid
For some choices made bad and good
For some choices in life we wish we could
When in our life of last
We are thankful for our past
Its time to share our great path
Before our life is in the past
By Stephen Wallace 18 years
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God Bless you.0
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That is an awesome poem.0
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*hugs* im sorry about your dad.
i lost mine as well and i send you strength today and any day which you need a little extra.0 -
What a lovely writer your son is, thank you for sharing.
I'm sorry for your loss. Will pray for you today. :flowerforyou:0 -
What an awesome sentiment. My most heartfelt condolences for your loss.0
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That was a touching, great poem. Sending you hugs through the internet. Hope you can feel the love your dad has for you and be a little comforted. To be honest though, I can't know and would be terrified to know what that's like.
Hope someone comes and gives you a real big hug soon. :flowerforyou:0 -
Such a beautiful poem your son wrote. I'm sorry for your loss, and hope your day gets better.0
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Thanks to all of you for your support and prayers. My dad was my best friend and my "go to" guy. No matter what he always listened, never passed judgement and would only give advice if it was wanted.0
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