Feedback on my dating profile...

DowntimeDesigns
DowntimeDesigns Posts: 134 Member
edited October 4 in Chit-Chat
Yes, this is random, but I'm trying online dating and have not been very successful.

I was wondering if there are a few women who would mind checking out my profile and giving me your thoughts or suggestions for changes. Just shoot me a message and I will send you a link.

Thanks!
Matt

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  • 0PhAtDaDdY
    0PhAtDaDdY Posts: 569 Member
    Yes, this is random, but I'm trying online dating and have not been very successful.

    I was wondering if there are a few women who would mind checking out my profile and giving me your thoughts or suggestions for changes. Just shoot me a message and I will send you a link.

    Thanks!
    Matt

    My wife is Filipino we meet online back in 2003,we have a 7yo daughter and doing great.. Check out the Philippines as well...
  • legmotor
    legmotor Posts: 197 Member
    I'd start by being you and writing like you write and being honest about who you are. If you go with the "what will get more results" approach, you will have wasted each others time when she realizes "you" aren't really what she thought she was getting.

    Plus I am sure this in no was is an attempt to fish for compliments or to use a free site like MFP to cast a bigger net. ; )
  • Italiana_xx79
    Italiana_xx79 Posts: 593 Member
    I'll try.... you can always copy, cut and paste your profile intro here :smile:
  • DowntimeDesigns
    DowntimeDesigns Posts: 134 Member
    I'd start by being you and writing like you write and being honest about who you are. If you go with the "what will get more results" approach, you will have wasted each others time when she realizes "you" aren't really what she thought she was getting.

    Plus I am sure this in no was is an attempt to fish for compliments or to use a free site like MFP to cast a bigger net. ; )

    I agree wholeheartedly which is why I came to somewhere like here to get advice from strangers. I very well could have posted this on Facebook, and gotten B.S. advice from my friends. I put out honesty, I want to receive honesty.

    Fishing for compliments not so much, but the wider net approach crossed my mind ;)
  • Brandicaloriecountess
    Brandicaloriecountess Posts: 2,126 Member
    Sure.
  • odusgolp
    odusgolp Posts: 10,477 Member
    bring it.
  • damonmath
    damonmath Posts: 359 Member
    I have been totally unsuccessful at online dating sites. I can write a nice profile, but it was the actual dates that didn't quite pan out.

    I gave up ... I decided I'll wait til it just happens again. :/

    Good Luck to you!
  • odusgolp
    odusgolp Posts: 10,477 Member
    I have much to say, so please allow for my belated reply :)
  • downtome
    downtome Posts: 529 Member
    Don't feel bad, i have been on POF for about 6 months and all i get is a bunch of creeps that message me or not anyone who i might be interested in! I'm still holding out for that someone right for me though. I also believe that it's not luck at all but timming. When the time is right, it will happen so hang in there, i am! :)
    Denise
  • damonmath
    damonmath Posts: 359 Member
    Don't feel bad, i have been on POF for about 6 months and all i get is a bunch of creeps that message me or not anyone who i might be interested in! I'm still holding out for that someone right for me though. I also believe that it's not luck at all but timming. When the time is right, it will happen so hang in there, i am! :)
    Denise

    Good to know. I keep getting liars. I understand a little white lie here or there. But one lady claimed to be 38 in her profile and was 48. :embarassed: That's a generational lie that can't be rectified rationally.

    Then another claimed to be drama free. bahahahahahaha Really?? No one id drama free. lol
  • ejohndrow
    ejohndrow Posts: 1,399 Member
    Yes, this is random, but I'm trying online dating and have not been very successful.

    I was wondering if there are a few women who would mind checking out my profile and giving me your thoughts or suggestions for changes. Just shoot me a message and I will send you a link.

    Thanks!
    Matt

    My wife is Filipino we meet online back in 2003,we have a 7yo daughter and doing great.. Check out the Philippines as well...
    We have plenty of Filipinos over here.
  • tashjs21
    tashjs21 Posts: 4,584 Member
    Don't feel bad, i have been on POF for about 6 months and all i get is a bunch of creeps that message me or not anyone who i might be interested in! I'm still holding out for that someone right for me though. I also believe that it's not luck at all but timming. When the time is right, it will happen so hang in there, i am! :)
    Denise

    Good to know. I keep getting liars. I understand a little white lie here or there. But one lady claimed to be 38 in her profile and was 48. :embarassed: That's a generational lie that can't be rectified rationally.

    Then another claimed to be drama free. bahahahahahaha Really?? No one id drama free. lol


    If they are pushing a hard sell on what they are...they probably aren't that but want to be

    If they are pushing a hard sell on what they aren't...they probably are.

    Hang in there. I did the online dating thing and met a bunch of creeps then gave up and was enjoying being single and ended up meeting my Fiance through a mutual friend. When the time is right, it'll happen! :flowerforyou:
  • damonmath
    damonmath Posts: 359 Member
    Yes, this is random, but I'm trying online dating and have not been very successful.

    I was wondering if there are a few women who would mind checking out my profile and giving me your thoughts or suggestions for changes. Just shoot me a message and I will send you a link.

    Thanks!
    Matt

    My wife is Filipino we meet online back in 2003,we have a 7yo daughter and doing great.. Check out the Philippines as well...
    We have plenty of Filipinos over here.

    I'm addicted to Filipinas and was told to go to church to find em :)
  • kaits108
    kaits108 Posts: 305 Member
    Don't feel bad, i have been on POF for about 6 months and all i get is a bunch of creeps that message me or not anyone who i might be interested in! I'm still holding out for that someone right for me though. I also believe that it's not luck at all but timming. When the time is right, it will happen so hang in there, i am! :)
    Denise

    Good to know. I keep getting liars. I understand a little white lie here or there. But one lady claimed to be 38 in her profile and was 48. :embarassed: That's a generational lie that can't be rectified rationally.

    Then another claimed to be drama free. bahahahahahaha Really?? No one id drama free. lol

    hahah oh my gosh! At least you found out before you got into a serious relationship with her! Did she really think you wouldn't find out about a ten year age difference? People are crazy.
  • damonmath
    damonmath Posts: 359 Member
    Don't feel bad, i have been on POF for about 6 months and all i get is a bunch of creeps that message me or not anyone who i might be interested in! I'm still holding out for that someone right for me though. I also believe that it's not luck at all but timming. When the time is right, it will happen so hang in there, i am! :)
    Denise

    Good to know. I keep getting liars. I understand a little white lie here or there. But one lady claimed to be 38 in her profile and was 48. :embarassed: That's a generational lie that can't be rectified rationally.

    Then another claimed to be drama free. bahahahahahaha Really?? No one id drama free. lol

    hahah oh my gosh! At least you found out before you got into a serious relationship with her! Did she really think you wouldn't find out about a ten year age difference? People are crazy.

    She looked great for 48 for sure! But I mean I listen to music that she has never even heard of, how's that going to pan out in the long run?

    However, My roommate is 35 and his GF is 63... to each their own, just not for me.
  • odusgolp
    odusgolp Posts: 10,477 Member
    OK, first, let me say that you are adorable and your profile is very sweet. That being said, I am a very blunt person that will tell you straight up what I think… so please take this with a grain of salt and disregard it if it’s not your cup of tea.

    Upon reading your profile, I… got bored. It says the same thing most do. Who says they’d rather sit on the couch than do something active? No one admits that *LOL* And, who doesn’t like to travel? It was “nice.” It was “normal.” It did not grab my attention at all, strike me as original, make me laugh, and ultimately – it did not motivate me to contact you. Which is the goal, naturally. You say you’re really good at making people laugh, so… make them laugh.

    Random thoughts…

    You could say, “I am one of the good guys that knows how to treat a lady right.” OR “Women that say, ‘Flowers just die,’ should be kicked in the shins! I like some old time chivalry and the type of lady that appreciates it in return.”

    You could say, “I design pencils and notebooks and love what I do.” OR “My career is the thing dreams are made of… I just designed a Hello Kitty Pencil complete with whiskers and made some little girl out there squeal with delight. Squealing little girls + Creative job I love = Winning.”

    You could say, “It’s entirely possible for me to get whiplash if I see something shiny.”… nevermind, I say that…

    You see where I'm going? Take what you want to convey about yourself, and use your creativity. Don’t SAY you are funny and creative… SHOW them.
  • odusgolp
    odusgolp Posts: 10,477 Member
    FYI: Anyone that lies in their profile is single for a dam* good reason and should stay that way. Pisses me off every. single. time.
  • sandrinamsilva
    sandrinamsilva Posts: 651 Member
    I have been totally unsuccessful at online dating sites. I can write a nice profile, but it was the actual dates that didn't quite pan out.

    I gave up ... I decided I'll wait til it just happens again. :/

    Good Luck to you!

    Yes this! I gave up a few weeks ago! Whatever happens will happen!
  • sandrinamsilva
    sandrinamsilva Posts: 651 Member
    FYI: Anyone that lies in their profile is single for a dam* good reason and should stay that way. Pisses me off every. single. time.

    Agree
  • damonmath
    damonmath Posts: 359 Member
    ... Don’t SAY you are funny and creative… SHOW them.

    This is what I did and got more email replies this way.

    <<<<<<< And no photos like this guy ... Big turn off on a dating site. No sunglasses either. Or photos in the mirror.
  • tashjs21
    tashjs21 Posts: 4,584 Member
    FYI: Anyone that lies in their profile is single for a dam* good reason and should stay that way. Pisses me off every. single. time.

    *highfive*
  • Italiana_xx79
    Italiana_xx79 Posts: 593 Member
    Don't feel bad, i have been on POF for about 6 months and all i get is a bunch of creeps that message me or not anyone who i might be interested in! I'm still holding out for that someone right for me though. I also believe that it's not luck at all but timming. When the time is right, it will happen so hang in there, i am! :)
    Denise


    Awe, I started to finish a profile on POF but maybe I won't now. I don't like going to bars or clubs and I am kind of shy so I thought online dating maybe a good place to start, but now I am starting to think otherwise :frown:
  • sarahmaryfearnley
    sarahmaryfearnley Posts: 366 Member
    My husband and I met online and have been happily married for 2 years. Something to keep in mind is that it does still take time and you do have to go on dates with loosers and some you think are ok but turn out not cool at all after hangin with them for a bit.

    I was on for a year and met my husband just as I was ready to leave. Figured I'ld give it one more shot and I'm glad I did. He was much luckier. I was the first date he went on but that's just because I'm awesome.
  • 0PhAtDaDdY
    0PhAtDaDdY Posts: 569 Member
    Yes, this is random, but I'm trying online dating and have not been very successful.

    I was wondering if there are a few women who would mind checking out my profile and giving me your thoughts or suggestions for changes. Just shoot me a message and I will send you a link.

    Thanks!
    Matt

    My wife is Filipino we meet online back in 2003,we have a 7yo daughter and doing great.. Check out the Philippines as well...
    We have plenty of Filipinos over here.

    It's soooooooooooo fun to go over there, lol
  • Scott613
    Scott613 Posts: 2,317 Member
    I would try online dating but nobody would believe the random **** I write/say. I'm always saying or doing something that keeps me entertained therefore my profile would read like a comedy.
  • kapeluza
    kapeluza Posts: 3,434 Member
    You're a graphic designer dude!!! How can your profile be boring?!!! Haven't seen it but I went by some else's review.
  • Italiana_xx79
    Italiana_xx79 Posts: 593 Member
    I would try online dating but nobody would believe the random **** I write/say. I'm always saying or doing something that keeps me entertained therefore my profile would read like a comedy.

    And that would be a bad thing? :wink: Would probably be one of the better ones that I have seen :bigsmile:
  • DowntimeDesigns
    DowntimeDesigns Posts: 134 Member
    After polling about 20 people, the results are in and they are....

    - The profile is perfect
    - The profile is terrible
    - Its too long
    - Its too short
    - It doesn't have enough about you
    - It has too much about you
    THUS proving that all women are different and there is no pleasing ANY of them.


    So it will stay the same as it is for now, thank you to those that tried to help.
  • Breckgirl
    Breckgirl Posts: 606 Member
    Sure I'll take a look. I'm a veteran of online dating.
  • bflicker11
    bflicker11 Posts: 296
    Shoot me the link please. I've used dating sites many times and have seen A LOT of profiles. I'll def be honest. :smile:
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