a poem
kgprncss01
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I was kinda testing myself the other night to see if i could actually still write a poem. I came up with this one pretty fast. My brain just started flooding with words. So here it is. I would love feedback!
Two brains crash together,
one burning bright.
A raven flew by your window,
on the sea of fear and fright.
Come listen my sister,
do you hear the raging of the storm?
Just light the night your child was unborn.
Two brains crash together,
one burning bright.
A raven flew by your window,
on the sea of fear and fright.
Come listen my sister,
do you hear the raging of the storm?
Just light the night your child was unborn.
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