Feedback on my dating profile...

I'd start by being you and writing like you write and being honest about who you are. If you go with the "what will get more results" approach, you will have wasted each others time when she realizes "you" aren't really what she thought she was getting.

Plus I am sure this in no was is an attempt to fish for compliments or to use a free site like MFP to cast a bigger net. ; )

bring it.

I have much to say, so please allow for my belated reply

Don't feel bad, i have been on POF for about 6 months and all i get is a bunch of creeps that message me or not anyone who i might be interested in! I'm still holding out for that someone right for me though. I also believe that it's not luck at all but timming. When the time is right, it will happen so hang in there, i am!
Denise

Good to know. I keep getting liars. I understand a little white lie here or there. But one lady claimed to be 38 in her profile and was 48. :embarassed: That's a generational lie that can't be rectified rationally.

Then another claimed to be drama free. bahahahahahaha Really?? No one id drama free. lol

Don't feel bad, i have been on POF for about 6 months and all i get is a bunch of creeps that message me or not anyone who i might be interested in! I'm still holding out for that someone right for me though. I also believe that it's not luck at all but timming. When the time is right, it will happen so hang in there, i am!
Denise

Good to know. I keep getting liars. I understand a little white lie here or there. But one lady claimed to be 38 in her profile and was 48. :embarassed: That's a generational lie that can't be rectified rationally.

Then another claimed to be drama free. bahahahahahaha Really?? No one id drama free. lol

If they are pushing a hard sell on what they are...they probably aren't that but want to be

If they are pushing a hard sell on what they aren't...they probably are.

Hang in there. I did the online dating thing and met a bunch of creeps then gave up and was enjoying being single and ended up meeting my Fiance through a mutual friend. When the time is right, it'll happen! :flowerforyou:

Don't feel bad, i have been on POF for about 6 months and all i get is a bunch of creeps that message me or not anyone who i might be interested in! I'm still holding out for that someone right for me though. I also believe that it's not luck at all but timming. When the time is right, it will happen so hang in there, i am!
Denise

Good to know. I keep getting liars. I understand a little white lie here or there. But one lady claimed to be 38 in her profile and was 48. :embarassed: That's a generational lie that can't be rectified rationally.

Then another claimed to be drama free. bahahahahahaha Really?? No one id drama free. lol

hahah oh my gosh! At least you found out before you got into a serious relationship with her! Did she really think you wouldn't find out about a ten year age difference? People are crazy.

OK, first, let me say that you are adorable and your profile is very sweet. That being said, I am a very blunt person that will tell you straight up what I think… so please take this with a grain of salt and disregard it if it’s not your cup of tea.

Upon reading your profile, I… got bored. It says the same thing most do. Who says they’d rather sit on the couch than do something active? No one admits that *LOL* And, who doesn’t like to travel? It was “nice.” It was “normal.” It did not grab my attention at all, strike me as original, make me laugh, and ultimately – it did not motivate me to contact you. Which is the goal, naturally. You say you’re really good at making people laugh, so… make them laugh.

Random thoughts…

You could say, “I am one of the good guys that knows how to treat a lady right.” OR “Women that say, ‘Flowers just die,’ should be kicked in the shins! I like some old time chivalry and the type of lady that appreciates it in return.”

You could say, “I design pencils and notebooks and love what I do.” OR “My career is the thing dreams are made of… I just designed a Hello Kitty Pencil complete with whiskers and made some little girl out there squeal with delight. Squealing little girls + Creative job I love = Winning.”

You could say, “It’s entirely possible for me to get whiplash if I see something shiny.”… nevermind, I say that…

You see where I'm going? Take what you want to convey about yourself, and use your creativity. Don’t SAY you are funny and creative… SHOW them.

I have been totally unsuccessful at online dating sites. I can write a nice profile, but it was the actual dates that didn't quite pan out.

I gave up ... I decided I'll wait til it just happens again.

Good Luck to you!

Yes this! I gave up a few weeks ago! Whatever happens will happen!

... Don’t SAY you are funny and creative… SHOW them.

This is what I did and got more email replies this way.

<<<<<<< And no photos like this guy ... Big turn off on a dating site. No sunglasses either. Or photos in the mirror.

Don't feel bad, i have been on POF for about 6 months and all i get is a bunch of creeps that message me or not anyone who i might be interested in! I'm still holding out for that someone right for me though. I also believe that it's not luck at all but timming. When the time is right, it will happen so hang in there, i am!
Denise

Awe, I started to finish a profile on POF but maybe I won't now. I don't like going to bars or clubs and I am kind of shy so I thought online dating maybe a good place to start, but now I am starting to think otherwise :frown:

Yes, this is random, but I'm trying online dating and have not been very successful.

I was wondering if there are a few women who would mind checking out my profile and giving me your thoughts or suggestions for changes. Just shoot me a message and I will send you a link.

Thanks!
Matt

My wife is Filipino we meet online back in 2003,we have a 7yo daughter and doing great.. Check out the Philippines as well...

We have plenty of Filipinos over here.

It's soooooooooooo fun to go over there, lol

You're a graphic designer dude!!! How can your profile be boring?!!! Haven't seen it but I went by some else's review.

Shoot me the link please. I've used dating sites many times and have seen A LOT of profiles. I'll def be honest.