sooo i write poetry.

mandag9008
mandag9008 Posts: 182 Member
edited October 2024 in Chit-Chat
no matter where ive been
ive yet to belong
from all the memories
none ive remembered all along
all the tears that have fallen
have dried from all the nights ive cried
from the words to the written all have been said
all have been heard
although the truth yets to remain
im drained.
open my heart and it rains.
all the emotion floods, runs thick like blood
like a bird in the sky
ill fly, off to a land of wonder.

so im turning this in to a competion. NO ITS NOT ABOUT ME. do you like it??

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  • fit4mom
    fit4mom Posts: 1,352 Member
    It's beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

    Time has come to say goodbye,
    Seasons passing with an array of lights,
    Never quite knowing how to say,
    That thing you wanted to embrace,
    The words lay quivering on your lips,
    Dancing playfully in enchanted bliss,
    Playing now upon your mind,
    Looking, looking for the words to find,
    Emotions that you do not know,
    The names of whom you desire to show,
    Hoping now they will appear,
    As your numbness has become so clear,
    Taking over in embrace,
    Upon your soul as a heavy weight,
    Words are not a friend but a foe,
    Knowing now it's just time to say no,
    See you later my dear friend,
    Shine today,
    You will not be me again,
    This has got to be the end,
    To this old life,
    You are a treasured gift.
  • misstasharenee
    misstasharenee Posts: 95 Member
    ...My eyes are open to the truth
    I stand firm in it's presence
    ...I see my pass and pass it proud
    without no second guesses
    ...Who is this woman that stands before me?
    a conqueror in her own right
    ...With scarred emotions and adequate fears
    and still ready to take flight
    ....She's ME! with renewed vision and nourishment in my soul
    and this is only a glimpse of whats new to be unfold
    ...So I stand in the mirror and let the robe drop
    a new me is presented from bottom to top!
  • misstasharenee
    misstasharenee Posts: 95 Member
    no matter where ive been
    ive yet to belong
    from all the memories
    none ive remembered all along
    all the tears that have fallen
    have dried from all the nights ive cried
    from the words to the written all have been said
    all have been heard
    although the truth yets to remain
    im drained.
    open my heart and it rains.
    all the emotion floods, runs thick like blood
    like a bird in the sky
    ill fly, off to a land of wonder.

    so im turning this in to a competion. NO ITS NOT ABOUT ME. do you like it??




    I thought it was great!
  • misstasharenee
    misstasharenee Posts: 95 Member
    It's beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

    Time has come to say goodbye,
    Seasons passing with an array of lights,
    Never quite knowing how to say,
    That thing you wanted to embrace,
    The words lay quivering on your lips,
    Dancing playfully in enchanted bliss,
    Playing now upon your mind,
    Looking, looking for the words to find,
    Emotions that you do not know,
    The names of whom you desire to show,
    Hoping now they will appear,
    As your numbness has become so clear,
    Taking over in embrace,
    Upon your soul as a heavy weight,
    Words are not a friend but a foe,
    Knowing now it's just time to say no,
    See you later my dear friend,
    Shine today,
    You will not be me again,
    This has got to be the end,
    To this old life,
    You are a treasured gift.

    You rocked it!
  • vsmurrow
    vsmurrow Posts: 145
    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    I have a gun get in the van.

    -Anonymous
  • kenzietea
    kenzietea Posts: 614 Member
    double post
  • kenzietea
    kenzietea Posts: 614 Member
    I can't imagine your despair
    or the places you often traveled to in your head.
    I am certain an artery was weaved in your mind,
    Worn down from the same footprints,
    that would travel the same pathway.
    Over and over, never wandering from the same aisle.
    You were too scared to think of the possibilities of anything else.
    Demonic weeds of thought overgrew, but you
    Never allowed your mind to take you anywhere else
    except to the same destination.
    The fear of ending up somewhere new
    was far too caustic on your heart.

    I hope in between your day-dream torments,
    you still made time to visit the ocean, too.
    I hope the breeze still kissed your face.
    and I hope, even just for a millisecond, you felt warm.
  • kenzietea
    kenzietea Posts: 614 Member
    ...My eyes are open to the truth
    I stand firm in it's presence
    ...I see my pass and pass it proud
    without no second guesses
    ...Who is this woman that stands before me?
    a conqueror in her own right
    ...With scarred emotions and adequate fears
    and still ready to take flight
    ....She's ME! with renewed vision and nourishment in my soul
    and this is only a glimpse of whats new to be unfold
    ...So I stand in the mirror and let the robe drop
    a new me is presented from bottom to top!

    This is awesome =P
  • jlfox165
    jlfox165 Posts: 81
    The walls are gone
    there remains no boundaries
    I can not find you or see myself
    My mind battles my heart on
    battlefields of self-intention
    I cannot help my self.
    I am riding on the wind,
    tossed upon the wave
    remembering a sweet image
    of kissing you.
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