Crush Notes
Replies
-
This content has been removed.
-
No.
On The Edge
Standing here out on the edge
Watching the surf crash on the beach
A lonely gull cries out overhead
As it soars far out of reach
My thoughts, they follow onwards
Out over the heaving sea
And in the stillness of my soul
I think of what you mean to me
With the taste of salt upon my lips
And my body buffeted by the air
It's at times like these I feel alive
With my heart and soul laid bare
So my thoughts, they travel on
Far out over the swelling sea
I catch a glimpse of my feelings
Of just what you mean to me
Once again I stand at the edge
Where the waves wash over the sand
I realise and reach out to you
To take you by the hands
As I stare into your lovely eyes
More captivating than the sea
I come to understand
That you mean everything to me2 -
Roses are red
Daffodils are yellow
I didn't expect
A poetry fellow1 -
This content has been removed.
-
Wind And Rain
The cooling towers belch vapour into the leaden sky
Curling up to join the clouds high above
And it's raining, it's raining so hard
I thought I was going to be washed away
And it seems to rain forever
Yes it seems to rain forever
When you aren't by my side
And I'm staring into space trying to work it out
The clouds race away driven before the storm
And it's blowing, it's blowing so hard
I thought I was going to be swept away
And the cold wind seems to blow forever
Yes the cold wind seems to blow forever
When you aren't by my side
I reach for you in the dead of night
Forgetting you're not there
And I'm crying, I'm crying so hard
I thought I was going to wash myself away
And it seems I'm going cry to forever
Yes it seems I'm going cry to forever
Because you aren't by my side
I feel your breath against my cheek
It makes everything seem alright
And you're breathing, you're breathing so hard
It seems you have swept me away
And I wish this moment could last forever
Yes I wish this moment could last forever
When you are by my side3 -
Yep. I occasionally perform at small festivals and open mike nights. Working on my first book of poetry.4
-
This content has been removed.
-
I'm a fan.0
-
This is most recent piece
Rear-view Mirror
Speeding down the highway
The radio's playing a familiar tune
I've got the pedal flat against the floor
And I can't get out of this place too soon
The rain glistens on the tarmac
With the wipers beating double-time
The past reflected in my rear-view mirror
As the road ahead begins to climb
Moving forward
Driving nowhere anywhere
Got to get away from here
Driving myself out of here
Right out of my mind
It's time to change a gear move it up
White lines stretch off into the dark
Headlights reflect off the cat's-eyes
Down the road I'm never coming back
The rain pounds against my windscreen
Like the tears of a god long passed
They mirror the tears in my own eyes
And I know I'm driving too fast
Moving forward
Driving nowhere anywhere
Got to get away from here
Driving myself out of here
Before I change my mind
Everything is receding into the distance
My vision is focussed on the road ahead
And time and momentum eat up the miles
Leaving the past long buried and dead
All that are left are reflections
And an empty space beneath my heart
There's darkness in my rear-view mirror
Now that we are so many miles apart
Moving forward
Driving nowhere anywhere
Got to get away from here
Driving myself out of here
Time to find myself a different life
Moving forward
Driving nowhere anywhere
Got to get away from here
Driving myself out of here
Right out of your life
Relationships in the rear-view mirror may appear better than they were in reality.2 -
OutOfUserName wrote: »
Not ever crossed my mind to0 -
That's just foolin'! A couple of years ago some friends asked me for some crude rhymes for valentine's cards. I did about 20 of them.0
-
Psh I can write poetry too0
-
*kitten*...that backfired0
-
Nappy hair nappy hair
Eyes like a frog
Get down on all....
Never mind2 -
One last one for now
Into Shadow
The shadows creep across the floor
A signal that the moment has passed
The sun sinks low in the distance
And the storm clouds closing in fast
Looking out into the darkened world
The colours all paled and fled
Staring out to the distant horizon
The moonlight faded, dead
I strive to see what I cannot see
To feel what I cannot feel
But the shadows that dwell inside of me
They overwhelm me still
Yes I strive to feel and I strain to see
But this darkness it covers my sight
I still reach out in my blindness
Alone on this cold and dark night
Trapped back here in my weakness
Unable to perceive a way through
Can't find any points of reference
In this monochromatic hue
Everything is all black and white
This world in neglected decay
The moment seems static, frozen in time
And the shadows just won't melt away
I strive to see what I cannot see
And feel what I cannot feel
But the shadows that dwell inside of me
Yes, they overwhelm me still
I strive to feel and I strain to see
This darkness it covers my sight
And I still reach out in my blindness
Alone on this dark and cold night0 -
Dear Crush,
You are obviously reading my profile and keeping tabs on me... Why no friend request? You know I'd accept! What's the hold up?
Sincerely
~L1 -
Dear crush
Oh wait...I don't have one
NM0 -
Dear Crush
Let's get naked
Sincerely your shy crush :flowerforyou:1 -
slimgirljo15 wrote: »Dear Crush
Let's get naked
Sincerely your shy crush :flowerforyou:
I already am!0 -
slimgirljo15 wrote: »Dear Crush
Let's get naked
Sincerely your shy crush :flowerforyou:
I already am!
You know me so well, it's like you can read my mind
1 -
Dear Crush,
Just look into my eyes and you'll see what I'm thinking!
Yours Truly,
~L0 -
This content has been removed.
-
This content has been removed.
-
This content has been removed.
-
-
slimgirljo15 wrote: »Dear Crush
Let's get naked
Sincerely your shy crush :flowerforyou:
Jo, you had to write this for someone else we all know you're not shy.2 -
Dear Crush,
You know who are. Nuff said.
Ta amo0 -
Dear Crush,
I'm needy. Pay attention to me.
Me0 -
kinetixtrainer2 wrote: »slimgirljo15 wrote: »Dear Crush
Let's get naked
Sincerely your shy crush :flowerforyou:
Jo, you had to write this for someone else we all know you're not shy.
Oi.... I didn't want him to think I was too forward.. you think the "lets get naked" gave it away
0 -
slimgirljo15 wrote: »kinetixtrainer2 wrote: »slimgirljo15 wrote: »Dear Crush
Let's get naked
Sincerely your shy crush :flowerforyou:
Jo, you had to write this for someone else we all know you're not shy.
Oi.... I didn't want him to think I was too forward.. you think the "lets get naked" gave it away
sorry Jo... not trying to mess you up.
0
This discussion has been closed.
Categories
- All Categories
- 1.4M Health, Wellness and Goals
- 393.6K Introduce Yourself
- 43.8K Getting Started
- 260.3K Health and Weight Loss
- 175.9K Food and Nutrition
- 47.5K Recipes
- 232.5K Fitness and Exercise
- 431 Sleep, Mindfulness and Overall Wellness
- 6.5K Goal: Maintaining Weight
- 8.6K Goal: Gaining Weight and Body Building
- 153K Motivation and Support
- 8K Challenges
- 1.3K Debate Club
- 96.3K Chit-Chat
- 2.5K Fun and Games
- 3.8K MyFitnessPal Information
- 24 News and Announcements
- 1.1K Feature Suggestions and Ideas
- 2.6K MyFitnessPal Tech Support Questions