Crush Notes
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 On The Edge
 Standing here out on the edge
 Watching the surf crash on the beach
 A lonely gull cries out overhead
 As it soars far out of reach
 My thoughts, they follow onwards
 Out over the heaving sea
 And in the stillness of my soul
 I think of what you mean to me
 With the taste of salt upon my lips
 And my body buffeted by the air
 It's at times like these I feel alive
 With my heart and soul laid bare
 So my thoughts, they travel on
 Far out over the swelling sea
 I catch a glimpse of my feelings
 Of just what you mean to me
 Once again I stand at the edge
 Where the waves wash over the sand
 I realise and reach out to you
 To take you by the hands
 As I stare into your lovely eyes
 More captivating than the sea
 I come to understand
 That you mean everything to me2
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            Roses are red
 Daffodils are yellow
 I didn't expect
 A poetry fellow1
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            Wind And Rain
 The cooling towers belch vapour into the leaden sky
 Curling up to join the clouds high above
 And it's raining, it's raining so hard
 I thought I was going to be washed away
 And it seems to rain forever
 Yes it seems to rain forever
 When you aren't by my side
 And I'm staring into space trying to work it out
 The clouds race away driven before the storm
 And it's blowing, it's blowing so hard
 I thought I was going to be swept away
 And the cold wind seems to blow forever
 Yes the cold wind seems to blow forever
 When you aren't by my side
 I reach for you in the dead of night
 Forgetting you're not there
 And I'm crying, I'm crying so hard
 I thought I was going to wash myself away
 And it seems I'm going cry to forever
 Yes it seems I'm going cry to forever
 Because you aren't by my side
 I feel your breath against my cheek
 It makes everything seem alright
 And you're breathing, you're breathing so hard
 It seems you have swept me away
 And I wish this moment could last forever
 Yes I wish this moment could last forever
 When you are by my side3
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            Yep. I occasionally perform at small festivals and open mike nights. Working on my first book of poetry.4
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            I'm a fan.0
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 Rear-view Mirror
 Speeding down the highway
 The radio's playing a familiar tune
 I've got the pedal flat against the floor
 And I can't get out of this place too soon
 The rain glistens on the tarmac
 With the wipers beating double-time
 The past reflected in my rear-view mirror
 As the road ahead begins to climb
 Moving forward
 Driving nowhere anywhere
 Got to get away from here
 Driving myself out of here
 Right out of my mind
 It's time to change a gear move it up
 White lines stretch off into the dark
 Headlights reflect off the cat's-eyes
 Down the road I'm never coming back
 The rain pounds against my windscreen
 Like the tears of a god long passed
 They mirror the tears in my own eyes
 And I know I'm driving too fast
 Moving forward
 Driving nowhere anywhere
 Got to get away from here
 Driving myself out of here
 Before I change my mind
 Everything is receding into the distance
 My vision is focussed on the road ahead
 And time and momentum eat up the miles
 Leaving the past long buried and dead
 All that are left are reflections
 And an empty space beneath my heart
 There's darkness in my rear-view mirror
 Now that we are so many miles apart
 Moving forward
 Driving nowhere anywhere
 Got to get away from here
 Driving myself out of here
 Time to find myself a different life
 Moving forward
 Driving nowhere anywhere
 Got to get away from here
 Driving myself out of here
 Right out of your life
 Relationships in the rear-view mirror may appear better than they were in reality.2
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            OutOfUserName wrote: »
 Not ever crossed my mind to0
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            That's just foolin'! A couple of years ago some friends asked me for some crude rhymes for valentine's cards. I did about 20 of them.0
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            Psh I can write poetry too0
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            *kitten*...that backfired0
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            Nappy hair nappy hair
 Eyes like a frog
 Get down on all....
 Never mind2
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            One last one for now
 Into Shadow
 The shadows creep across the floor
 A signal that the moment has passed
 The sun sinks low in the distance
 And the storm clouds closing in fast
 Looking out into the darkened world
 The colours all paled and fled
 Staring out to the distant horizon
 The moonlight faded, dead
 I strive to see what I cannot see
 To feel what I cannot feel
 But the shadows that dwell inside of me
 They overwhelm me still
 Yes I strive to feel and I strain to see
 But this darkness it covers my sight
 I still reach out in my blindness
 Alone on this cold and dark night
 Trapped back here in my weakness
 Unable to perceive a way through
 Can't find any points of reference
 In this monochromatic hue
 Everything is all black and white
 This world in neglected decay
 The moment seems static, frozen in time
 And the shadows just won't melt away
 I strive to see what I cannot see
 And feel what I cannot feel
 But the shadows that dwell inside of me
 Yes, they overwhelm me still
 I strive to feel and I strain to see
 This darkness it covers my sight
 And I still reach out in my blindness
 Alone on this dark and cold night0
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            Dear Crush,
 You are obviously reading my profile and keeping tabs on me... Why no friend request? You know I'd accept! What's the hold up?
 Sincerely
 ~L1
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            Dear crush
 Oh wait...I don't have one
 NM0
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            Dear Crush
 Let's get naked
 Sincerely your shy crush :flowerforyou:1
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            slimgirljo15 wrote: »Dear Crush
 Let's get naked
 Sincerely your shy crush :flowerforyou:
 I already am!0
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            slimgirljo15 wrote: »Dear Crush
 Let's get naked
 Sincerely your shy crush :flowerforyou:
 I already am!
 You know me so well, it's like you can read my mind 1 1
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            Dear Crush,
 Just look into my eyes and you'll see what I'm thinking! 
 Yours Truly,
 ~L0
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            slimgirljo15 wrote: »Dear Crush
 Let's get naked
 Sincerely your shy crush :flowerforyou:
 Jo, you had to write this for someone else we all know you're not shy.2
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            Dear Crush,
 You know who are. Nuff said.
 Ta amo0
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            Dear Crush,
 I'm needy. Pay attention to me.
 Me0
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            kinetixtrainer2 wrote: »slimgirljo15 wrote: »Dear Crush
 Let's get naked
 Sincerely your shy crush :flowerforyou:
 Jo, you had to write this for someone else we all know you're not shy.
 Oi.... I didn't want him to think I was too forward.. you think the "lets get naked" gave it away 0 0
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            slimgirljo15 wrote: »kinetixtrainer2 wrote: »slimgirljo15 wrote: »Dear Crush
 Let's get naked
 Sincerely your shy crush :flowerforyou:
 Jo, you had to write this for someone else we all know you're not shy.
 Oi.... I didn't want him to think I was too forward.. you think the "lets get naked" gave it away 
 sorry Jo... not trying to mess you up.
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