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Let's hear your Haiku skillz

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  • WhittRakWhittRak Member Posts: 572 Member Member Posts: 572 Member
    I wrote this to my husband, and left it at his desk at work when he was away (yes we work for the same company). Written in pencil.

    I was here.
    You were not.
    Pencil.
  • KrisyKatKrisyKat Member Posts: 749 Member Member Posts: 749 Member
    I was here.
    You were not.
    Pencil.

    This is NOT written in haiku format. For shame!!! :laugh:
  • PapaverSomniferumPapaverSomniferum Member Posts: 2,682 Member Member Posts: 2,682 Member
    People assume that
    all you need for Haiku is
    a few short phrases

    You know what they say
    about people who assume?
    I don't know, either.
  • KrisyKatKrisyKat Member Posts: 749 Member Member Posts: 749 Member
    <----Poetry teacher;
    Shakes her head at syllables...
    It's FIVE-SEVEN-FIVE!!!!

    :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
  • PapaverSomniferumPapaverSomniferum Member Posts: 2,682 Member Member Posts: 2,682 Member
    Try to blow some minds;
    assign a dozen sonnets.
    Iambic! For Shame!
  • DarlingThiefDarlingThief Member Posts: 78 Member Member Posts: 78 Member
    (The tl/dr the entire thread. Hopefully no one else has done this yet...)
    A haiku about getting out of bed:
    No no no no no
    No no no no no no no
    No no no no no
  • coolteenager101coolteenager101 Member Posts: 65 Member Member Posts: 65 Member
    Birds Fly and Kids die
    In this world filled with miseries
    Only Love is something good
  • PapaverSomniferumPapaverSomniferum Member Posts: 2,682 Member Member Posts: 2,682 Member
    Birds Fly and Kids die
    In this world filled with miseries
    Only Love is something good

    I first read this as
    "Birds Fly and Kites die"; must be
    summer tragedy.
  • OishiiOishii Member Posts: 2,694 Member Member Posts: 2,694 Member
    Belly like jelly
    Stretch marks and C section scars
    Love's incubator

    :smile:
  • LizladyninjaLizladyninja Member Posts: 4 Member Posts: 4
    Not food related:

    English:

    Crystal Rain falls
    Masking falling crystal tears
    -flowers bloom yet.

    Japanese:
    雨降りて
    涙隠して
    咲く花よ

    It say's the same thing. I wrote this for my Japanese Literature class. :p Corrected it in my Japanese language class!
  • OishiiOishii Member Posts: 2,694 Member Member Posts: 2,694 Member
    Personal trainer
    Asks if I'm sore anywhere
    Yes, but can't say why! :bigsmile:

    Like :laugh:
  • HeidiMightyRawrHeidiMightyRawr Member Posts: 3,348 Member Member Posts: 3,348 Member
    I should be working,
    Yet I'm on MyFitnessPal,
    It is much more fun.
  • KrisyKatKrisyKat Member Posts: 749 Member Member Posts: 749 Member
    Try to blow some minds;
    assign a dozen sonnets.
    Iambic! For Shame!

    Strict on the rhyme scheme,
    Grades on quatrains and couplets;
    Shakespeare would be proud!!
  • Pengi81Pengi81 Member Posts: 338 Member Member Posts: 338 Member
    I just LOVE penguins
    They are so fluffy and cute
    In their dinner suit!
  • sktllmdrhmzsktllmdrhmz Member Posts: 2,090 Member Member Posts: 2,090 Member
    Always overdressed.
    Why must the penguins show off?
    It's just Applebee's.
  • PapaverSomniferumPapaverSomniferum Member Posts: 2,682 Member Member Posts: 2,682 Member
    I dress up at times.
    People think it's old lady
    night at junior prom.
  • sktllmdrhmzsktllmdrhmz Member Posts: 2,090 Member Member Posts: 2,090 Member
    I'd take you to prom.
    We'd pretend to chaperone
    but we'd spike the punch.
  • PapaverSomniferumPapaverSomniferum Member Posts: 2,682 Member Member Posts: 2,682 Member
    I don't drink often.
    but when i do, it's spiked with
    LSD and rum.

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  • songbyrdsweetsongbyrdsweet Member Posts: 5,691 Member Member Posts: 5,691 Member
    Dog and cat in love
    At my feet, end of the bed
    Dog sleeps on cat's butt
  • laurieblair2012laurieblair2012 Member Posts: 106 Member Posts: 106
    5 o'clock am,
    The gym is empty, quiet.
    This hour is my own.
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